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Post by jillianb02 on Dec 11, 2007 17:05:59 GMT -5
Elite gymnasts are susceptible to physiological and physical injury to due the intense pressures that the American public places on them to succeed in the Olympics.
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Post by jillianb02 on Dec 14, 2007 20:26:43 GMT -5
O.K. here is a tentitive second draft:
The physical demands and media pressures that are placed upon elite gymnasts are the primary reasons for the injuries and abuse that surround the sport.
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Post by jillianb02 on Dec 18, 2007 21:25:05 GMT -5
Except for the wording, I think this is conceptually my finalized thesis:
Elite Gymnasts, due mainly to the pressure put on them by coaches, parents, and the media, are easily susceptible to physical injury and abuse.
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